The silence stretched, heavy and suffocating.

  Lucien took a step forward. Ray instinctively matched it with a step back, his boots splashing in the shallow, filthy runoff.

  “I had him,” Lucien said, his voice tight but dangerously steady. “Five more minutes and he wouldn't have been able to move. The capture was secured.”

  Ray clenched his fists, the adrenaline beginning to crash, leaving him shaky. “He had backup coming. You heard them. If I didn't end it now, we would have been swarmed.”

  “Yes,” Lucien replied coldly. “And now you’ve announced our position to every killer in the sewer network. You didn't throw that bomb to stop him, Melborne.” Lucien’s gaze sharpened, pinning Ray to the wall. “You threw it to kill both of us.”

  Ray swallowed hard. He couldn't tell him about the quest. “…I needed to capture him.”

  Lucien’s brow twitched. “Capture? Now, why would you want to capture a high-ranking insurgent?” For the first time, a flicker of genuine surprise crossed Lucien’s face. He let out a slow, deliberate breath—part exhaustion, part calculation.

  “What should I do with you, Ray Melborne?” Lucien asked quietly.

  Ray’s spine stiffened. Lucien’s gaze drifted to the cracked stone wall, looking at something only he could see.

  “I think about that day on the training grounds,” Lucien continued. “More often than I should. Sometimes, I’m relieved I failed to kill you. Other times…” He looked back, his lightning flickering like a dying star. “…I regret letting you live.”

  The words hit harder than the concussive blast of the bomb. Ray forced himself to stand straight. “Yeah? Well, I hesitated that day too. But not anymore. If you’re going to kill me, at least tell me why.”

  Silence. The sewer seemed to hold its breath. Ray’s thoughts raced. He doesn't hate me like a rival. He’s observing me like an obstacle.

  Then, it clicked. The way Lucien fought. The way he bent the very laws of magic to balance the scales. Ray’s eyes widened.

  “…Are you also a player?” Ray asked hoarsely.

  Lucien lifted a brow. The surprise was clear this time, but he didn't answer. He neither confirmed nor denied the term. He simply looked at Ray the way one looks at a mathematical variable that shouldn't exist in the equation.

  That silence—that deliberate refusal to speak—told Ray everything he needed to know.

  “[ANALYZE],” Ray barked, pouring every scrap of his remaining mana into the skill.

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  STATUS — TARGET ANALYZED

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  NAME: LUC@@S & @($(($@

  AGE: * &

  LEVEL: ) ( % █ █

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  HP: ((&^

  STM: #$((&

  ATTRIBUTES

  STR: #?#?#?

  AGI: (*

  VIT: ^$%

  DEX: !#

  INT: **

  WIS: ()*

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  ERROR.

  DATA STREAM CORRUPTED.

  UNABLE TO STABILIZE OUTPUT.

  MEMORY DISTORT—

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  The screen spasmed. Symbols screamed across Ray's vision—warping, folding, and tearing themselves apart like digital shrapnel.

  Then—Pain.

  A white-hot spike slammed into Ray’s skull, like a red-hot blade driven through his eyes and into the center of his brain.

  “GHH—!”

  Ray grabbed his head, his vision doubling and then tripling. A shrill, high-pitched ringing drilled into his ears. He staggered, nearly dropping to one knee as his stomach lurched.

  Lucien stepped closer, his lightning crackling faintly. “What did you just do? I felt that. The same nauseating prickle I felt during the Academy exams. What did you do to me?”

  Ray sucked in a shaking breath, his teeth gritted against the agony. The System hadn't just failed; it had rejected him.

  “You’re... an error in the system,” Ray rasped, forcing himself upright.

  Lucien paused. Then, slowly, a thin, dangerous smile touched his lips. “Am I?”

  He tilted his head, his gaze no longer hostile, but terrifyingly interested. “Or aren't you the error in this system, Ray? You should know better than anyone. You're hiding something. Power that doesn't belong to this world.”

  Ray’s Ash Circuit stirred in response, smoke prickling under his skin.

  Lucien stepped back half a pace, his lightning flaring in a warning arc. “…Careful. Things like us tend to break the system.”

  Lucien straightened despite the blood, despite the burns, and even though every line of his body suggested he was a single movement away from total collapse.

  “You’ve made this messy, Ray Melborne,” he said, his voice a chilling rasp. “So now, we finish it.”

  Smoke began to seep from Ray’s pores, thick and heavy, crawling across the surface of the sewer water like a living fog. The Quest window was still active in his periphery, a constant reminder of the stakes. Orren lay unconscious in the muck; Lucien stood as the final obstacle.

  There was no version of this where things went back to normal.

  Ray didn’t think. He moved.

  煙拳?ロケットパンチ！！

  ENKEN: ROKETTO PANCHI!!

  (Smoke Fist Rocket Punch!!)

  Smoke detonated from his fist. The concussive force launched Ray forward like a cannon round, his boots tearing grooves through the stone. He hurled himself at Lucien with everything he had left, the smoke wrapping his arm, compressing and hardening into a piston of gray ash.

  He missed.

  Lucien twisted aside at the last possible microsecond. Lightning flared violently, a jagged white streak in the dark, as the punch screamed past him and shattered a massive section of the sewer wall behind. Stone exploded into shrapnel.

  Just because Lucien was injured didn’t mean he was finished.

  Lucien countered instantly. A crack of thunder snapped through the chamber as his arm came up, lightning condensing into a brutal, close-range strike aimed straight at Ray’s ribs.

  Ray barely reacted. He crossed his arms and forced his Ash Circuit to vent outward in a desperate shield. The lightning slammed into the barrier—searing pain ripped through Ray’s forearms—but the blow held.

  Both of them skidded backward, boots splashing through filth and rubble. Lucien landed first, his breathing heavier, blood running freely down his arm as the lightning along his veins flickered like a dying lamp.

  He wasn’t at full strength. Ray knew it. This was the window.

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  Ray planted his foot, his smoke surging harder, thicker, darker than ever before.

  煙拳?バリアントストライク！！

  ENKEN: BARIANTO SUTORAIKU!!

  (Smoke Fist Valiant Strike)

  He charged. This time, he didn't leap; he drove forward with the weight of his entire body. Smoke coiled tight around his fist as he threw the punch—short, sharp, and packed with lethal intent. Lightning met it head-on. The impact detonated between them in a violent clash of heat and pressure.

  Smoke burned. Lightning screamed. The sewer lit up in a strobe-light effect of white and black as the two forces ground against each other—neither yielding, neither backing down.

  Ray gritted his teeth, pouring every scrap of mana into his arm. Lucien snarled quietly, the electricity flaring brighter despite his wounds. For a heartbeat, they were locked together—two anomalies refusing to give ground.

  And then, Ray realized something terrifying. Lucien was still smiling.

  Then—something slipped.

  The smoke around Ray’s arm began to thin. It didn't shatter; it just... weakened. Ray’s eyes widened. He pulled back instinctively, but his body didn't respond.

  Heavy. Sluggish. It felt like trying to run through a pool of cold syrup.

  Ray barely registered the change before Lucien was already there. Lightning surged. An electric fist screamed toward his face. Ray twisted desperately, avoiding a direct hit by inches, but the shockwave still hammered into his forearms.

  Pain exploded up his bones, sharp and vibrating, leaving his hands numb. Ray staggered back with a hiss.

  “Ghh—!”

  Panic spiked in his chest. I’m losing output. Why am I losing output?! There was no time to calculate. Ray improvised, his "Gamer Brain" reaching for a crowd-control move.

  煙拳?スモークフック！！

  ENKEN: SUMōKU FUKKU!!

  (Smoke Fist: Smoke Hook!!)

  Smoke erupted from his hand—not in a blast, but in a twisting, rope-like coil. It latched onto Lucien’s burned arm. Ray yanked with everything he had.

  Lucien stumbled forward half a step—the opening was there.

  “Now—!”

  煙拳?バリアントストライク！！

  ENKEN: BARIANTO SUTORAIKU!!

  (Smoke Fist Valiant Strike)

  Ray drove his fist forward. The smoke wrapped tight. The angle was perfect. The timing was clean. The hit landed square on Lucien's chest—

  —and felt like punching wet cloth.

  No shockwave. No crunch. No satisfying resistance. Just a dull, empty thud.

  Ray’s heart sank. “What—?” he gasped.

  Lucien barely moved. His coat fluttered from the impact, and the lightning flickered, but his stance held firm. His eyes narrowed, sharp and alert, as if confirming a theory Ray hadn't even begun to understand.

  “The more you struggle,” Lucien whispered, the smile finally reaching his eyes, “the more I weigh.”

  Ray didn’t stop. He couldn’t afford to.

  He forced his power forward again, digging deeper into his mana pool than ever before, pushing past the warning ache in his chest that told him he was redlining.

  Everything. All of it.

  煙拳?スモークアッパー！！

  ENKEN: SUMōKU APPā!!

  (Smoke Fist: Smoke Upper!!)

  Smoke surged upward in a violent plume as Ray launched the strike—an uppercut fueled by pure desperation. His body screamed as he threw every remaining ounce of strength into the arc of the blow.

  This time, the blow landed.

  Lucien grunted, a sharp, surprised sound forced from his throat as the impact twisted his body half a step back. Ray’s eyes lit up with a manic spark.

  Got you.

  Whatever Lucien was doing—whatever invisible balance he was using to drag Ray’s output down—it wasn't constant. It flickered. It came in waves, like a high-ping connection or a poorly optimized script. There were gaps. There were windows.

  Ray sucked in a ragged breath, his mind racing through the tactical implications. I can work with that. If I time it right—if I force him to keep switching states—

  The thought barely finished forming before the world exploded in white.

  Lucien was already moving. He was too fast for Ray’s current AGI stat. Ray didn’t even see the punch wind up. Lightning cracked at point-blank range and—

  BOOM.

  The fist slammed straight into Ray’s ribs. The impact knocked the air clean out of his lungs, pain detonating across his side as his body was launched backward. He skidded across the stone, smoke tearing loose from him in shredded wisps as he slammed into the sewer wall hard enough to rattle his teeth.

  “—Ghk!”

  Ray collapsed to one knee, coughing violently. Every breath was a knife twisting between his lungs. Lucien stood where he was, lightning fading and reforming around his arm, his eyes cold and clinical.

  Okay, Ray thought grimly, tasting copper in his mouth. So the gaps are real. But so is the difference between us. If I hesitate again, he won't give me another window to exploit.

  The only sound in the cavernous junction was their ragged, synchronized breathing.

  Ray stared at Lucien. They were the same age—the same year at the Academy. That thought hit him harder than the strike to his ribs. The only reason he could even stand here was that Lucien was already half-dead from the bomb. If Lucien were at full strength, the fight would have ended before it began.

  “You’re a monster,” Ray said, the words tearing themselves out of his chest.

  Lucien froze. For a heartbeat, genuine surprise crossed his face. Then, he threw his head back and laughed. It wasn't the cruel laughter of a villain; it was free, genuine, and echoed through the tunnels until the walls themselves seemed to join in.

  “That,” Lucien said at last, wiping a drop of blood from the corner of his eye, “is quite the compliment—coming from you.”

  Ray didn’t understand. He didn’t have time to care. Lucien’s posture was settling back into that terrifying, predatory calm.

  Windows, Ray thought, his "Analyze" logic finally clicking into place. I don't just need to find the gaps. I need to blow them open.

  [AMATERION SURGE]

  If Lucien’s control came in waves, Ray just needed to overwhelm the frequency. He didn't need a clever move. He needed a surge that left no room for balance.

  Lucien was still mid-breath when Ray moved.

  煙拳?スモークガトリング！！

  ENKEN: SUMōKU GATORINGU!!

  (Smoke Fist: Smoke Gatling!!)

  The smoke exploded. It surged over Ray’s arms, thickening and hardening into massive spectral fists layered atop his own. Every punch launched a smoking afterimage forward—dozens of impacts slamming into Lucien in a relentless, brutal succession.

  Boom. Boom. Boom.

  Lucien was driven back, his boots scraping through sludge and stone. But Ray felt the drain immediately. His mana was bottoming out. His smoke thinned, and his lungs began to scream.

  Now.

  “—AMATERION SURGE!”

  The skill ignited. Power roared back into his body like a floodgate snapping open. Strength surged; speed sharpened; the world snapped into terrifyingly high-definition clarity.

  Ray pressed forward. Sixty seconds. That was all he had. No finesse. No restraint. Just a total, desperate dump of every stat point he possessed.

  10 seconds: Ray threw punches with reckless abandon. Each strike detonated against Lucien like a battering ram. His knuckles screamed, but he didn't slow down.

  20 seconds: The smoke stopped clinging to Ray alone. It spilled outward, crawling across the sewer floor like a living thing, swallowing the stone and pooling around Lucien’s feet. Visibility dropped to zero. The air grew thick and tasted of ash and hot iron.

  30 seconds: Ray’s spectral fists changed. The smoke condensed, each knuckle swelling to the size of a boulder. When he punched, the impact didn’t just hit Lucien—it crushed the space around him. The walls cracked. Lucien was forced to guard with both arms, his lightning flaring violently just to stay upright.

  50 seconds: The smoke reached its peak. It towered around them like a collapsing sky—dense, boiling, and oppressive. Ray’s fists were monstrous now, carrying the weight of a landslide. Lucien’s lightning flickered unevenly, the precision finally breaking under the sheer volume of Ray’s output.

  Ray felt it. The edge of the surge. His vision narrowed. The power was about to run out, but for these final moments, the world belonged to him.

  “Flash Point.”

  That was all Ray heard—a quiet, calm whisper through the roar of his own power.

  Then warmth bloomed in his stomach. In his shoulders. It was too warm. Ray looked down.

  Three holes stared back at him. One was punched clean through his abdomen; two more were torn through his shoulders. Smoke bled uselessly from the wounds, dispersing into the air.

  His legs gave out. Ray collapsed into the sludge, his breath ripping out in a wet, choking gasp. Panic slammed into his chest as his body refused to obey. Air wouldn't come. His vision tunneled into a dark, narrow pinprick.

  He looked up through the haze.

  Lucien was still standing. Barely. His coat was shredded, and his posture wavered like a tower moments from collapse—but he stood. Back straight. Chin high. Unbroken. He looked down at Ray with a flat, empty stare.

  Ray forced a ragged sound from his burning lungs. “W-what... what are you?” he rasped. “You’re controlling my power... my speed... what the hell are you?”

  Lucien didn't smirk. He didn't gloat. He stepped closer, his boots splashing through the foul water, and stopped right in front of Ray’s face.

  “The reason I can do those things,” Lucien said calmly, lightning crackling weakly around his fingertips, “is because I’m special.”

  He tilted his head, looking at Ray with a bewildered and conflicted expression.

  “I’m the main character, after all.”

  Ray’s eyes widened. The logic of the world shattered. Then, Lucien’s boot connected with his jaw.

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  QUEST: CAPTURE ORREN KEST - FAILED

  Objective: Capture the powerful criminal threatening the empire's future!!

  Reward: Skill Unlocked — [INVENTORY]

  Failure: unconscious or death.

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