In the grand tapestry of the Star of Desolation, certain threads were woven with gold. These were the "fated moments"—the intersections of destiny that readers would highlight in their digital copies.
High above the Outer Peak, on the "Cloud-Watching Platform" of the Inner Sect, one such thread was tightening.
Shen Yuanxing stood at the edge of the precipice, his training sword leveled at the horizon. He was seventeen, but his eyes held the weary weight of an ancient soul. His Qi was a turbulent sea, crashing against the barriers of the Fourth Level of Qi Condensation with a violence that made the air hum.
Behind him, Xue Lianhua watched in silence.
In the original novel, this was the scene where she truly began to fall for him. She saw his struggle, his raw power, and the "loneliness of the genius" that mirrored her own. Today, as Shen Yuanxing executed a strike that split a falling leaf into eight perfect pieces, she felt that familiar tug—the gravity of a protagonist.
It was an attraction born of fire. It was the awe one feels when looking at a lightning storm; it was terrifying, beautiful, and made her blood sing with the need to be stronger. When Shen Yuanxing turned to her, his brow damp with sweat and his eyes burning with ambition, she felt her heart skip. This was the man who would redefine the world. This was the man who made her want to reach for the stars.
But, she thought, her fingers subconsciously brushing the silk pouch where she kept the remaining crumbs of a Snow-Pear cake, he does not make me feel like I can sit down.
The "Love" blooming here was a heavy, monumental thing. It was a duty. It was a race. It was a far cry from the quiet, sun-drenched rock in the southern orchard where a certain mediocre disciple had told her that "perfect is boring."
"Senior Sister Xue," Shen Yuanxing said, his voice deep and resonant. "The Promotion Exams begin tomorrow. I heard the Elders are watching the Inner Peak rankings closely. Are you prepared to defend your position?"
"I am," she said, her voice regaining its icy edge. "And you? They say you are aiming for the top three."
"I aim for the top," Shen said, his grip tightening on his sword. "Anything less is a waste of my breath."
Xue Lianhua nodded, but for the first time in her life, she found the hero’s intensity slightly... exhausting. She found herself wondering if he had ever considered that the air at the top of the mountain was, as Lin Qingyu put it, actually quite cold.
Meanwhile, at the bottom of the mountain, the "Cold" was the last thing on Lin Qingyu’s mind. He was currently staring at a wooden board in the center of the Outer Peak plaza.
[Outer Peak Promotion Exams: Day 1]
Requirement: All disciples Level 3 and above must participate.
Failure to participate or total failure of all three categories results in immediate expulsion from the Azure Cloud Sect.
Lin Qingyu rubbed his temples. "System, define 'immediate expulsion.'"
[Emotional Stability System]
Definition: You lose your bed, your cafeteria privileges, and your access to the Library. You will be sent back to your mortal village to become a farmer or a low-level accountant.
Probability of Death: Without the sect's protective array, you will be eaten by a Low-Grade Spirit Wolf within 48 hours.
System Note: While you enjoy being a 'shrub,' shrubs generally need a fence to keep the goats away. The Sect is your fence.
"Right. So I have to pass," Lin Qingyu muttered. "But I have to pass badly."
This was the delicate dance of high-IQ survival. If he came in first, he’d be moved to the Inner Peak, placed under a high-pressure mentor, and forced to fight in the front lines of every future conflict. If he failed completely, he’d be homeless and wolf-food.
He needed to land exactly in the "Safe Middle." The 51st to 100th rank. The zone of the "Acceptable Average."
"Talking to the board again, Qingyu?"
Mu Ruxin walked up beside him, carrying a stack of registration talismans. She looked stressed—more stressed than he had ever seen her.
"The exams," she sighed. "The Library is going to be closed for three days while the Elders use the main hall for the Written Test. I don't know what I’ll do with myself. And I’m worried about the 'Spirit Sensing' portion. My Qi has always been a bit... shy."
Lin Qingyu looked at her. Her high EQ usually made her great at navigating people, but when it came to the raw, competitive nature of cultivation, she lacked the "killer instinct."
"Ruxin," he said, stepping closer to block the wind. "Look at the requirements. You don't need to be a genius. You just need to show that you're useful. You’re the best archivist in the sect. Focus on the Written Test and the Theory of Arrays. They won't kick out the only person who can find a scroll in under ten minutes."
"You really think so?" she asked, her eyes searching his.
"I know so," he said, giving her a reassuring pat on the shoulder. "In fact, I’m planning on being right there with you in the 'Average' bracket. We can celebrate our mediocrity with a nice pot of ginger tea when it’s over."
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Mu Ruxin let out a breath she seemed to have been holding for days. "A pot of tea sounds like a dream. Thank you, Qingyu. You always make everything seem less like a disaster."
"That’s because most disasters are just poorly managed schedules," he said with a wink.
But internally, Lin Qingyu was already running the numbers.
The Promotion Exam consisted of three parts:
The Written Test (Sect History, Array Theory, Herbology). Lin's Strategy: Answer exactly 70% of the questions correctly. Purposely 'forget' the most obscure details to avoid looking like a scholar.
Spirit Sensing (Measuring Qi Purity and Density).
Lin's Strategy: Use the Calm Heart Breathing Method to suppress his Qi. Make it look steady but 'thin.' Like a stream that’s reliable but can’t power a mill.
The Combat Sparring.
Lin's Strategy: Win the first match with 'luck.' Lose the second match convincingly but with enough 'effort' that the Elders don't call it a fix.
He spent the evening in his dorm, not meditating for power, but meditating for precision. He had to control his internal energy so perfectly that not even a sensing stone would detect his high-level stability.
[Emotional Stability System]
Alert: You are using more brainpower to try and 'fail' than most people use to 'succeed.'
Evaluation: This is highly efficient laziness.
Current Mental State: 95% (Calculated)
Reward: Heart-Rate Control +1%
System Note: If you keep this up, you might actually become invisible to the naked eye.
The next morning, the sun rose over a different kind of Azure Cloud Sect. The air was no longer filled with the peaceful chirping of birds; it was filled with the rhythmic chanting of disciples and the heavy, metallic scent of sharpened steel.
The Plaza was divided into sections. Hundreds of Outer Disciples stood in neat rows, their faces pale and their hands trembling. For them, this was the moment that decided if they would be gods or peasants.
Lin Qingyu stood in the middle of the pack, his expression one of mild boredom. To his left, a boy was hyperventilating so hard he looked like he might pass out before the first bell.
"Breathe into your stomach, not your chest," Lin Qingyu whispered without looking over. "You're starving your brain of oxygen. You'll fail because you can't read the paper, not because you don't know the answer."
The boy blinked, followed the advice, and slowly calmed down. "Thanks, Senior Brother."
"Don't thank me. Just don't pass out on my shoes. I only have one pair."
The first bell rang.
"Outer Disciple Promotion Exam, Part One: The Written Test. Begin!" the Head Proctor shouted.
Bundles of paper were distributed by spirit-controlled brushes that flew through the air like birds. Lin Qingyu caught his and laid it flat on the stone desk.
He scanned the questions.
Question 1: Who was the founder of the Azure Cloud Sect and what was his primary weapon?
Answer: Ancestor Azure. A sword. (Too easy. Everyone knows this. Correct.)
Question 4: Describe the interaction between 'Moonlight Grass' and 'Fire-Laced Root' in a basic Qi-Replenishing pill.
Answer: They neutralize each other's toxicity but require a stabilizer. (Correct.)
Question 15: What is the 44th stroke of the 'Great Southern Warding Array' and why is its angle critical?
Lin's Internal Monologue: I know this. It’s a 45-degree tilt to account for the mountain's leyline shift. If I answer this, I’m in the Top 10.
Lin's Written Answer: "It is for... aesthetic balance?" (Wrong. Perfect.)
He moved through the paper with the surgical precision of a corporate auditor. He mapped out a path to a 72% score—high enough to be respected, low enough to be forgotten.
Across the hall, he could see Mu Ruxin. She was writing furiously, her tongue poking out of the corner of her mouth in concentration. She was in her element. She loved the logic of arrays. He felt a small spark of pride; she was going to do well.
As the exam progressed, the temperature in the hall began to rise. The "Qi pressure" from hundreds of nervous teenagers was starting to create a stifling atmosphere.
Suddenly, a loud THUD echoed through the hall.
The boy who had been hyperventilating earlier had finally succumbed to the stress. He had collapsed, his forehead hitting the desk with a wet smack.
The Proctor didn't even move. "Drag him out. He fails."
Lin Qingyu didn't look up, but his hand tightened slightly on his brush. The sect is a cold place, he thought. They don't want people. They want tools. If the tool breaks, they throw it away.
It reinforced his decision. He wouldn't be a tool. He would be the grain of sand that the machine couldn't catch.
By the time the final bell rang, Lin Qingyu had finished. He handed in his paper and walked out into the cool afternoon air.
He didn't go to the training grounds to watch the others practice their sword forms. He didn't go to the cafeteria to gossip about the questions.
He headed toward the back of the mountain, toward a small, hidden stream he had found. He needed to clear his head. The "High-IQ" calculation of failure was more taxing than he had expected.
As he walked, he noticed someone standing by the water.
It was Shen Yuanxing. The hero was alone, away from his admirers. He was staring at his own reflection in the water, his expression one of profound doubt.
This wasn't in the book. In the book, the hero was always confident. But here, in reality, the hero looked... human.
"It’s a lot of weight, isn't it?" Lin Qingyu said, standing twenty feet away.
Shen Yuanxing didn't turn around. He didn't have to; his senses were already far beyond a normal disciple's. "The exam? It’s nothing. A formality."
"I'm not talking about the exam," Lin Qingyu said, looking at the water. "I'm talking about the way everyone looks at you. Like you're a miracle they're all waiting to happen. That’s a heavy thing to carry up a mountain."
Shen Yuanxing finally turned. His eyes were sharp, searching Lin Qingyu’s face. "You're the one from the orchard. The one who 'chooses' to be mediocre."
"I prefer the term 'selectively excellent,'" Lin Qingyu said with a faint smile. "I'm excellent at being exactly where I want to be. And right now, I want to be someone who isn't being watched by five Elders and a dozen jealous rivals."
Shen Yuanxing looked back at the water. "Sometimes, I wish I could just... stop. But if I stop, I fail the people who believe in me. If I stop, the darkness wins."
The darkness, Lin Qingyu thought. The Chapter 20 Raid. He can feel it. Even if he doesn't know what it is, he feels the pressure of the impending tragedy.
"You won't stop," Lin Qingyu said. "People like you are incapable of it. But just remember: the mountain doesn't care how fast you climb it. It’ll still be there tomorrow. Maybe take a breath once in a while. The air is better when you’re not gasping for it."
He didn't wait for a response. He turned and walked away.
He had a high EQ, which meant he knew that the hero didn't need a mentor or a friend—he had plenty of those in the future. What the hero needed was a moment of reality.
As Lin Qingyu walked back toward the dorms, the System chimed one last time for the day.
[Emotional Stability System]
Achievement Unlocked: The Protagonist’s Mirror
Condition: Humanized the Hero without becoming his rival or his sidekick.
Reward: Presence Suppression +2%
System Evaluation: You are playing a very dangerous game, Lin Qingyu. You are becoming the 'NPC' that everyone remembers. That is the opposite of being invisible.
"I’m not trying to be remembered," Lin Qingyu whispered. "I'm just trying to make sure that when the world burns in thirteen days, the fire doesn't have anything to catch onto."
He looked toward the Southern Peaks. The shadows there seemed a little longer, a little darker.
Tomorrow was Spirit Sensing. Tomorrow, he had to prove he was average.
And for Lin Qingyu, being average was going to be his greatest masterpiece.

