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Chapter 1: I bet you wont last until dawn

  Monique should never have taken that bet, not let herself be convinced to spend the night at the cemetery. The spooky atmosphere, all the creepy shit was supposed to be her jam. She’d cultivated the whole goth girlfriend aesthetic with dedication: black lace chokers, Doc Martens worn down from graveyard strolls, an affinity with old horror media, and a collection of vintage fetishes (the magic kind) that would give any antique dealer a wet dream (the normal kind)

  She could deal with the spooky. But the cold? The cold was a different kind of enemy.

  It wasn’t just the biting chill creeping through her layers of velvet and mesh, and other fabrics that weren’t as cool and thus she hadn’t bothered to remember them, or the way the damp earth seemed to irradiate up into her bones.

  It was that stillness. That horrible, suffocating nothing that came with real cold, no bugs, no rustling trees, not even the wind wanting to be here. It wasn't even supposed to be that cold, and yet it was. Just breath like smoke and her own shivering body curled up in a sleeping bag too thin for this stupid dare. She was not being dramatic. At least not more than the situation deserved.

  “Bet you won’t last till dawn,” Shane had said, grinning like the cocky bastard he was, all leather jacket bravado and cigarette smoke. She should’ve punched him in the throat instead of smirking and saying, “Watch me, asshole.”

  He wasn’t even that good at being a cocky asshole, because Kellan Bishop existed, and nobody did cocky asshole as well as Kellan Bishop.

  Or maybe she just liked him more.

  Or him less.

  Depending on who him was.

  But there had never been a bet she hadn’t taken. Probably a dangerous habit.

  Naomi as always had been the voice of reason, and Naomi as always had been ignored.

  Now she was watching the fog roll slowly over the graves, low and thick like it had weight, swallowing the world foot by foot, inch by inch. Rolling into the graveyard like the tides. Like a tsunami in slow motion.

  She shifted, huddled in her sleeping bag. The headstone she’d set up against was slick with dew and older than most of the town, the name long since rubbed down to a faint whisper: Adelaide Brook, 1812 – 1841. Twentynine years and dead longer than Monique had even been alive. Which wasn’t her most insightful observation, but she was so very bored right now. She′d not even brought her phone, for Authenticity reasons. Left it in the locker. Because she was stupid.

  She craned her head to look back at the grave stone. She'd set up in-between the rows, because sleeping on a grave felt disrespectful.

  Adelaide Brook

  Somehow, the name didn’t feel dead.

  It felt like it was watching. Although Monique wasn't quite sure how exactly she came to that particular conclusion, she was convinced that the name was watching.

  This was probably nothing to be concerned about. Maybe nothing to be concerned about. Hopefully nothing to be concerned about.

  It began with a sound she couldn’t name.

  And thus her hopes were dashed.

  Not a voice. Not wind. Not the creak of old trees. Not the nocturnal stirrings of an animal.

  It was deeper than all of that, perhaps even older. A resonance that vibrated just under her skin, like the hum of a tuning fork pressed to her soul.

  She was very very evocative when panic and bile were rising in her throat. One would think that just for survival reasons that one's mind would stay focused on the present moment in a case such as this but apparently not.

  The sound was subtle at first, almost dismissible, but nonetheless incessant. Almost dismissible. Almost.

  But then, just before she could convince herself that she was imagining it the ground shifted.

  Not an earthquake, just a rumble. It was somehow intimate. The dirt behind her. Where Adelaide Brook’s grave was. Silently beneath the stone. Something inside had moved. Something inside the grave. Just once. A casual repositioning. A stretch. Perhaps it had wanted to maintain plausible deniability.

  Monique froze. Okay there was a reasonable explanation for this. Micro earthquakes. Or changes in the soil due to climate change. Or a hallucination.

  Her breath caught in her throat, suspended in the cold like crystal above her aunts kitchen sink. She dared a glance over her shoulder. The fog had thickened now, slithering across the headstones, curling around the iron fence in lazy loops. She didn’t know much, well at least not about fog, but that wasn’t how that was supposed to work. But even through it, through the fog

  She saw it.

  A single hand. Porcelain Pale.

  Fingers clawed in angles, too graceful to be human. Rising slowly, from the earth like soil was nothing but a door. And that door was opened with patience, with malice.

  Adelaide Brook was coming up. Not from underneath her grave, nor from where Monique was sitting but from somewhere close. And yet Monique was still convinced that it was in fact Her, rather than anyone else.

  Idly she thought about bone maracas, shake shake clatter, spilled everywhere. Skeletons during an earthquake. Bone maracas. If she wasn’t so fucking scared, she probably would have laughed. Instead she just gave a strangled, choking chuckle.

  The dirt parted around the thing that might have been Adelaide Brook once, without protest. Not like the soil had been broken, but like it had missed the presence like welcomed her return, to the surface world. Her face emerged last, framed by hair that fell like ink over cracked collarbones. Her eyes opened in the dark with a hollow glow, not white, not gold. Something more- something hungry.

  And she smiled.

  Not like a mindless thing.

  She smiled like she remembered Monique. Like she knew Monique.

  “Cold, darling?” Adelaide asked, her voice soaked in centuries of silence, like every word had to pass through decades of stillness and fog to find its shape. “Come closer. I… I promise… I’m much warmer.”

  Monique didn't move. Her limbs wouldn’t obey. Or maybe they knew better.

  Adelaide rose to her feet without a single speck of soil clinging to her, her dress an impossible thing, half shadow, half mourning lace that shifted like smoke when she stepped forward.

  “You called me,” she whispered, tilting her head. “With your breath. With your blood. With that lonely little dare.”

  Monique stared up at the ghost. Blinked once. Twice.

  Inside, panic was jackhammering at her ribcage, screaming what the fuck what the fuck what the actual entire FUCK, but she kept her face blank as a corpse and gave a slow, exaggerated shake of her head. Then she turned and walked,

  walked

  ,to the next grave over like nothing had happened. Because getting got by a ghost? That was a skill issue. And Monique prided herself on not taking Ls that embarrassing.

  The air around her crackled with frost, frost over old tombstones. She didn’t dare look back. Not yet.

  Ghosts were like boys with guitars, attention just fed them. She was guessing, but so far she hadn't been disproven.

  She crouched behind the next headstone, some rusted angel with half its face eroded, and pulled her coat tighter around her shoulders. Get it together, Momo, she told herself. This is supposed to be your aesthetic. Don’t fuck it up.

  Behind her, Adelaide’s voice came again, softer, curious. “Oh… clever little girl.”

  There was no footfall, no rustle. Just a sudden nearness. The kind that made the hairs on Monique’s neck do standing ovations.

  “You think it’s about skill?” the ghost murmured. “You think you can walk away from a binding? I don’t hunt, little thing. I answer.”

  Monique gritted her teeth. She hadn’t summoned anything. No candles, no chants, no chalk circles or goat guts. She didn’t do that kind of magic. Hell, she didn’t even believe in most of it. She liked spooky vibes, not spooky consequences. Sure, play stupid games win stupid prizes but the prize was supposed to be frostbite, not getting haunted.

  She peeked out from behind the statue.

  Adelaide was standing not ten feet away, hands clasped before her like a Victorian bride, or rather an Antebellum bride, that same unsettling smile curling her lips.

  “You slept on my grave,” she said, almost tenderly. “That’s enough.”

  Monique opened her mouth. The smartass was about to come out. Because she hadn't slept on her grave. But her throat closed around the words when she saw it, the shadow behind Adelaide. Long, warping wrong over the headstones. It didn’t follow the moonlight. It dragged, like something bigger was still trying to crawl through.

  Something Monique might’ve also accidentally invited.

  “You’re not the only thing that woke up, are you?” she whispered.

  Adelaide just laughed. Low. Delighted. “Oh, darling... I’m just the first.”

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  Monique broke the promise she had made to herself and quickly made her way over to the grave of her grandparents. She didn't want to disrespect anyone, and Adelaide was overreacting, so she didn't see another choice.

  Monique also broke the promise she’d made to herself not five minutes ago, the one about not running from ghosts, about holding the line like a spooky badass, and booked it across the cemetery grounds.

  Not a full sprint. Not yet. But that brisk, purposeful walk of someone trying to look like they had a plan while their brain was screaming, she’s floating she’s FLOATING she’s literally levitating what the fuck what the—

  She cut between headstones, ducked past weeping angels and rusty wrapped fences, her boots crunching over frostbitten grass, until she saw them, two simple granite slabs, side by side, under the old cedar tree at the far end of the cemetery.

  Eugene & Anissa Duvall. Her grandparents. The first people who’d ever made this accursed town feel like home. The kind of people who left cookies out for stray cats and coins in graveyard crevices “in case the dead needed something shiny to hold.” (Insert Ramble here perhaps?)

  Monique reached their grave and crouched low between the stones. Her fingers, trembling now, touched the cold granite.

  “I’m sorry,” she whispered. “I know this is weird. I know this is so much. But if there’s anything left of you guys, now would be a great time to pull the ghostly grandparent card.”

  Behind her, the air folded wrong again. Like something was trying to step through a curtain that wasn’t there. Adelaide’s voice followed, syrupy and slow.

  “Seeking sanctuary now? Sweet child. Sanctuary has a cost. You can’t just nestle into old bones and ask for absolution.”

  Monique stood up, turned, fists clenched. “You’re overreacting. I didn’t summon anyone. I didn’t light a candle, I didn’t chant a single Latin phrase, I didn’t even bring incense-”

  “You breathed,” Adelaide interrupted, her expression flattening into something colder, ancient. “You lay down and breathed on hallowed ground. You gave your warmth. The grave drank it in.”

  Monique felt the chill again, not the physical cold, but the sense of something watching from beneath. The soil shifted under her boots.

  Adelaide cocked her head. “You came to flirt with death, child. Why so quick to run when it flirts back?”

  “I came for a dare and bad decisions,” Monique snapped. “Not a fucking contract.”

  Adelaide smiled again. “Then run, little thing. Run faster. But know this: your heartbeat echoes now in two worlds. And there are other things listening.”

  And then, something laughed.

  Not Adelaide. Or Not just Adelaide

  “They can’t help you, little one.”

  The voice was rough as gravel, slow and heavy with a sorrow that cracked the air.

  Monique turned, and sucked air in through her teeth.

  He stood between two crooked stones, tall and worn, his body marred by the brutal signatures of a history no one ever got to grieve properly. African American, eyes clouded with the gray of the dead, but still burning with something sharper beneath. His face was swollen on one side, the bruises purpling across skin that should have been allowed to rest in peace. And the noose, tight around his neck, frayed with age but still very much there, hung like punctuation on an unspoken truth.

  Her heart clenched. Not with fear this time, but something far more human. Something primal. Empathy. Rage.

  “I didn’t—” she started.

  “I know,” he said, his voice deep and flat. “Doesn’t matter. You woke it.”

  He stepped forward, and the ground didn’t crunch under his boots. He wasn’t walking. Just drifting. Like he’d done this before. Like he'd had to do this too many times.

  “You think this place was just stone and rot?” he asked, gesturing around. “You think this land forgot what it was?”

  Monique shook her head, mouth dry. “No, I just- I came here on a dare. I didn’t mean to..”

  “You called, girl,” he cut her off, his tone sad, but firm. “Not just here. You called it in you. Something buried. Something tired of sleepin’. This place is a mirror. Whatever’s inside it comes up with the rest of the dead.”

  Monique stared. “What did I wake up?”

  The man looked over his shoulder. Adelaide was gone. But the fog had thickened, and the shadows were no longer staying still.

  He turned back to her, eyes hard now. “Something older than grief. Older than this graveyard. Something that ain’t a ghost and ain’t a god. It don’t care ‘bout right or wrong. It wants blood, memory, roots. And it’s awake now. ‘Cause you breathed where it’s buried.”

  Monique’s knees went weak. “I didn’t mean to, I didn’t want this.”

  The man reached out a hand, not touching her, just close, hovering.

  “You don’t get to want,” he said, soft again. “You got it now. You carry the weight. And they-” he nodded to her grandparents’ stones, “-they can’t leave this soil. Lived a good life, died a good death. So, No ghosts to call. No leaving but You still can.”

  “You said I should run,” she whispered.

  He nodded. “Run like you mean it. Run ‘til the dirt forgets your name.”

  Behind her, the ground groaned.

  No, Fuck this.

  She wanted to do something right tonight.

  Everything inside her screamed to run, to take the man’s warning and vanish into the night, back to warm lights and safe things, to her apartment cluttered with horror merch and books that didn’t breathe. But instead, Monique stepped forward. Chest tight. Throat raw. Heart cracking under the weight.

  “They just threw you in a ditch, right?” she said, voice trembling. “You don’t even have a grave. Not really. No stone. No name.”

  The ghost blinked. Slowly. Like he hadn’t heard that in a very long time.

  “I’m putting you to rest,” she said, firming up. “Properly. You deserve that. You all deserve that. Please. Tell me your name.”

  It was pleading. Not performance, not a challenge, not a dare.

  Just human.

  For the second time tonight, unknowingly, Monique invoked a ritual.

  No sigils. No candles. Just intention and grief wrapped in truth. And the land listened.

  A soft glow bloomed beneath her feet, curling outward in a slow, steady ripple like moonlight spilling over still water. The fog recoiled. The shadows twisted, shrieking as something ancient burned them back. Adelaide, caught mid approach, let out one last furious, indignant scream

  -and was snuffed out, like a flame under glass. Gone. Just gone.

  The glow encircled Monique and the ghost man, a gentle perimeter pulsing with the quiet power of remembrance. It wasn’t warmth. It was peace. And it had teeth.

  The man stared at her. Silent. Then, his posture shifted. Straighter. Proud. Maybe, proud.

  “Josiah,” he said, voice breaking slightly. “Josiah Boone. Born 1852. Died… 1876.”

  Killed before thirty. Forgotten. Erased.

  “No one ever asked me that before,” he murmured, his eyes glistening. “No one ever… saw me.”

  Monique swallowed hard. “I see you. And I’ll remember.”

  Josiah looked up, then over. The graveyard had stilled. Even the wrongness pulling up from below paused, watching.

  Listening.

  “You may’ve saved more than yourself tonight,” he said.

  Then he knelt. Pressed his palm into the dirt. Whispered words older than memory.

  And the ground answered.

  A pulse ran through the soil. Graves shimmered. Names long worn away reappeared. One by one, the lost began to shine faintly, those who’d never been mourned, those thrown away, those forgotten by history.

  And something beneath, whatever ancient hunger had stirred, it hesitated. Not defeated. But contained. Bound.

  For now.

  Josiah stood. Smiled once, soft and sad. “That’s enough to buy you time. And time is a powerful thing.”

  Monique’s knees finally gave, and she sank into the grass, breath hitching.

  “What now?” she whispered.

  Josiah looked to the stars. “Now? You live. You carry this. You don’t let the world forget.”

  Then he turned, and like mist, faded, not torn, not dragged … released.

  The glow slowly ebbed away.

  Monique sat in the dark. Alone. But not haunted. Well at least no longer actively haunted.

  As the light of the ritual dimmed, Josiah turned, less than mist now, more shape, more will, and extended a hand. Not for her to take, but to beckon. A silent invitation. Monique’s legs protested, knees aching, heart still trying to reboot from the night’s events, but she followed. She had to.

  He led her past the last rows of stones, beyond the neat fences and wrought iron borders. Into the wild edge of the graveyard where the earth got mean, untrimmed, unmarked, full of bramble and brush, like even death refused to catalog this place.

  And then he stopped.

  There was no marker. No stone. Just a patch of stubborn earth where the grass didn’t grow right, where the trees bowed away as if ashamed.

  Monique stared at it. Her throat tightened. She could feel it now. That energy, heavy and silent. The place where Josiah’s bones had been tossed like trash.

  “They said I was an example,” he said, staring down at the soil. “They didn’t bury me. Just dumped me. Let me rot. So no one would make noise.”

  Monique dropped to her knees beside the spot. “We’re gonna change that,” she said, quiet but firm. “Right now.”

  There were no tools. No shovels. Just her hands, her will, and the kind of anger that comes from seeing too much injustice and knowing you can’t fix it all. But you can fix this one thing.

  The earth was cold. Unyielding. Roots clawed at her fingers. Stones tore her palms. But she kept going. Digging. Pulling. Not crying. Just doing.

  Josiah watched in silence.

  Her hands found bone. She froze, breath catching, then carefully, reverently, began to gather. A jaw. Ribs. Scraps of a shirt, decomposed long ago. Rusted buttons. All that was left of a man erased from history.

  She carried him back inside the cemetery, piece by piece.

  It took hours.

  The ritual perimeter was gone, but something lingered. A hush. A reverence. Even the wind seemed to still as she gently laid the bones in a small hollow between two trees where the sun would touch it come morning.

  There was no coffin. No priest. Just hands and heart and sweat. And Josiah, standing beside her, looking whole for the first time.

  She found two bricks in the rubble near the groundskeeper’s shed and used a sharp stone to etch his name.

  Josiah Boone. 1852–1876. Seen. Remembered.

  She placed it at the head of his grave.

  Then she sat, bloodied fingers in her lap, breathing hard.

  Josiah looked down at the stone. Smiled. “That’s more than I ever dreamed of.”

  And then he looked at her.

  “You’ve done what most won’t ever try. You restored something. In me. In this place. And in you.”

  Monique blinked. “In me?”

  “You were the door tonight,” he said. “That thing beneath? It noticed. But so did the ones who remember. The ones like me.”

  She looked down at the grave. “Will it come back?”

  Josiah tilted his head. “It never really left. But you’re not helpless anymore.”

  She didn’t feel strong. She felt exhausted. Dirty. Numb. Icky. Wretched.

  But she had done something right.

  And Josiah, this almost forgotten soul, was home.

  The graveyard fell silent.

  One ghost laid to rest.

  One story remembered.

  One girl changed forever.

  I earned this bit of melodrama, Monique thought as she began to stumble her way home.

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